Talk:Functions of the Neuronal Circuits
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Some parts are clearly taken from Guyton and Hall's physiology, needs rephrasing.
--> oups, forgot to check those "definitions"! its ok now I fixed it. --Paris Charilaou 19:00, 5 September 2011 (CEST)
Unfortunately it is not enough. Much more of the article is clearly taken from the above mentioned book and needs rephrasing or preferably: those parts need completely rewriting in just your own use of words on how you understand the information/knowledge of what the article is about. -- Hanneke de Boer -- Editorial Board of WikiLectures 22:54, 5 September 2011 (CEST)
-- > it would be of great help to tell me which sections have a problem. --Paris Charilaou 23:17, 5 September 2011 (CEST)
- Almost all of them. The chapters of Divergence and Convergence have improved a lot, however all the examples there are taken from the book and they should be rephrased as well in your own words or preferably different examples.
- That said almost all of the Paragraphs have issues especially from "Prolongation of signals" and down. -- Hanneke de Boer -- Editorial Board of WikiLectures 16:11, 6 September 2011 (CEST)
--> did my best. i checked on google all the sentences and there is no match. I also checked the guyton pdf file that i downloaded a while ago (just for this purpose). I hope it's ok.
--> i checked all phrases and everything is ok. i think the copy-vio can be removed now. --Paris Charilaou 00:34, 14 September 2011 (CEST)
- Thank you Paris, the article is much better and well understandable now :) About the copyvio, it is much!! better written now and the only thing that remained I changed a bit I hope it is ok. I am sorry for being picky about this copyvio thing but it is for protecting you as an author. Thanks again for your contributions!