Talk:Functions of the Neuronal Circuits

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Some parts are clearly taken from Guyton and Hall's physiology, needs rephrasing.

--> oups, forgot to check those "definitions"! its ok now I fixed it. --Paris Charilaou 19:00, 5 September 2011 (CEST)

Unfortunately it is not enough. Much more of the article is clearly taken from the above mentioned book and needs rephrasing or preferably: those parts need completely rewriting in just your own use of words on how you understand the information/knowledge of what the article is about. --De Boer.jpg Hanneke de Boer -- Editorial Board of WikiLectures 22:54, 5 September 2011 (CEST)

-- > it would be of great help to tell me which sections have a problem. --Paris Charilaou 23:17, 5 September 2011 (CEST)

Almost all of them. The chapters of Divergence and Convergence have improved a lot, however all the examples there are taken from the book and they should be rephrased as well in your own words or preferably different examples.
That said almost all of the Paragraphs have issues especially from "Prolongation of signals" and down. --De Boer.jpg Hanneke de Boer -- Editorial Board of WikiLectures 16:11, 6 September 2011 (CEST)

--> did my best. i checked on google all the sentences and there is no match. I also checked the guyton pdf file that i downloaded a while ago (just for this purpose). I hope it's ok.

--> i checked all phrases and everything is ok. i think the copy-vio can be removed now. --Paris Charilaou 00:34, 14 September 2011 (CEST)

Thank you Paris, the article is much better and well understandable now :) About the copyvio, it is much!! better written now and the only thing that remained I changed a bit I hope it is ok. I am sorry for being picky about this copyvio thing but it is for protecting you as an author. Thanks again for your contributions!

--De Boer.jpg Hanneke de Boer -- Editorial Board of WikiLectures 01:30, 14 September 2011 (CEST)